Fic Update: "Dark Sun of Desire" Part Four
Mar. 9th, 2011 11:24 pm![[personal profile]](https://www.dreamwidth.org/img/silk/identity/user.png){kind=small}
mark_asphodelHaven't much been in the mood to deal with any of my longer WIPs (rather to my dismay).
Nonetheless, all the Nyna-talking of late did spur me to continue with this. Chapter Four, "Sing, Little Birdie" gets Nyna closer (she thinks) to her goal of a reunion with a certain masked knight. The Valencia scenes are still intercut gracelessly with Archanea flashbacks, but those will decrease substantially after the next chapter (without disappearing entirely).
Haven't yet decided quite how (or if!) to address the issue that Nyna wasn't 100% under mind control when she was rescued at the Dragon's Altar. That is some seriously hard material to grapple with. I probably should deal with it, but damned if that doesn't feel like one bombshell too many.
-x-
Too much crazy going on right now, everywhere. Sigh.
Nonetheless, all the Nyna-talking of late did spur me to continue with this. Chapter Four, "Sing, Little Birdie" gets Nyna closer (she thinks) to her goal of a reunion with a certain masked knight. The Valencia scenes are still intercut gracelessly with Archanea flashbacks, but those will decrease substantially after the next chapter (without disappearing entirely).
Haven't yet decided quite how (or if!) to address the issue that Nyna wasn't 100% under mind control when she was rescued at the Dragon's Altar. That is some seriously hard material to grapple with. I probably should deal with it, but damned if that doesn't feel like one bombshell too many.
-x-
Too much crazy going on right now, everywhere. Sigh.
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Date: 2011-03-10 02:18 pm (UTC)"If you're selling crazy, you're wasting your time. We're all stocked up here."