I think Ilia and women is a case of telling not showing on the scene.
As far as socially terrible fiction goes, personally I think this one (http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6966033/1/A_strange_swap) about takes the cake. The one you refer to is preeeetty bad, though -- and especially boggling considering that the rest of that author's writing is more or less readable.
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Date: 2011-05-26 02:09 am (UTC)As far as socially terrible fiction goes, personally I think this one (http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6966033/1/A_strange_swap) about takes the cake. The one you refer to is preeeetty bad, though -- and especially boggling considering that the rest of that author's writing is more or less readable.