Stupid Plotbunnies
Jun. 2nd, 2011 12:36 amDusted off my rejected "Mary Sue" challenge entry-- the Nada Kuya Jr. one that I've done about four drafts of. It's 2,500 words regarding the exploits of the super-special Eirika/Saleh sprog, with a crapload of world-fusion meta. Maybe it can become something passable? I dunno. I like some parts, but that's a lot of second-gen OC to put up with from a reader's perspective.
Just in case this character conception might work better from another perspective, I'm toying with a snippet of older!Ephraim dealing with his niece (aka Nada Kuya Jr.); if anything, the kid comes off as even more creepy.
Dear IS, it would be helpful if you'd given us any more information about the real Nada Kuya.
Meh. That's enough meta for one night.
Just in case this character conception might work better from another perspective, I'm toying with a snippet of older!Ephraim dealing with his niece (aka Nada Kuya Jr.); if anything, the kid comes off as even more creepy.
Dear IS, it would be helpful if you'd given us any more information about the real Nada Kuya.
Meh. That's enough meta for one night.