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"No Saint to Follow": Part Two (FE1/3/11)
Jan. 26th, 2010 07:02 pm Here we go with Part Two. This and Part One were originally conceived as a one-shot, separate from the main body of "No Saint to Follow." Some of the stylistic differences will probably show once Part Four comes up.
This one is a little darker, more violent, with some occurrences of "language." Oh well. Also, it's a rougher draft than usual... I think once I'm happy with it, I'll put three or four segments on ffnet.
( Steel and Thunder )
No complaints regarding King Jiol, please. The man had it coming.
And yes, Melissa is a bit of a head case. Note the lapse into third-person speech. I'll try to keep that to a minimum, but it's right there in canon.
ETA: Title comes from a lyric in "Bold Marauder" by Richard and Mimi Farina. I like the John Kaye cover version, personally.
This one is a little darker, more violent, with some occurrences of "language." Oh well. Also, it's a rougher draft than usual... I think once I'm happy with it, I'll put three or four segments on ffnet.
( Steel and Thunder )
No complaints regarding King Jiol, please. The man had it coming.
And yes, Melissa is a bit of a head case. Note the lapse into third-person speech. I'll try to keep that to a minimum, but it's right there in canon.
ETA: Title comes from a lyric in "Bold Marauder" by Richard and Mimi Farina. I like the John Kaye cover version, personally.
