Oh! I'm sorry. I have one last comment. I do want to add that I did enjoy the story overall (I mentioned that in my review, but then I caused this fuss and now I feel bad about saying anything). This issue was my only problem. I apologize for bringing it up at all.
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Date: 2010-02-06 04:46 am (UTC)I'll stop bothering you now.