Fic Update: "between the motion and the act"

With apologies to TS Eliot.

So, back when I first uploaded "Will" for fe_contest , I mentioned that I was on a "Grust kiddies" kick.  This is the other half of that spurt of Grust twins interest.  It's basically Marth wangsting over being a failure and trying to get himself back into heroic never-say-die mode, with the dilemma at hand being his total inability to save or protect or mitigate the circumstances of Yubello and Yumina.

( failure )

As penandpaper71  and sarajayechan  both observed-- FE12 didn't make Archanea any less bleak.  Just more twisted.

ETA: Reviews are loved, but someone telling me "Keep writing!" is like telling Charlie Sheen to keep freebasing.  Fanfic is as much a compulsion as it is a hobby.  I don't actually play any of the new games I've bought, or watch the DVDs I've bought, or anything.  Sigh.